kyle the slimy alien

Posted on March 24, 2015 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to kyle the slimy alien

  1. Josh says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:01 am

    I love your adjectives, and even better description!

  2. assag says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:02 am

    I like your story it is very exciting

  3. sungj says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:03 am

    GOOD ADJECTIVES, better if you do longer paragraphs

  4. johnc says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:24 am

    YOU USED BOSS SENTENCES!

  5. johnc says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:24 am

    YOU USED GOOD SENTENCES!

  6. Javena says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:26 am

    i like your adjectives

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