the final battle

6 Responses to the final battle

1. Josh says:

   March 24, 2015 at 9:53 am

   I really loved the title, as it matched with your story, especially the ending, as it was very furious!
   • Mark says:

     March 31, 2015 at 3:36 pm

     thank you Josh.I never noticed that!
2. sungj says:

   March 24, 2015 at 9:55 am

   good capital letters, but don’t put very big letters
3. assag says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:06 am

   this story is awesome very eye catching lay out my favorite part is when it says rarrrr! and No chance for you
4. ziemp says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:08 am

   The story was very interesting i would like to listen to the rest please.
   by Patrick.
5. caruk says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:14 am

   I like the part when the boy is gone 🙂

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