In the beginning, I was so hooked to read your story, and it was really good
at the beginning it hooked me so I wanted to read it
this story was mind blowing i wonder if you should be an author
Patrick i like the falling bit:)
it was amazing
wow good work pat
Nice story Patrick! Where did you get the inspiration from? Even better if you used more adverbs.
In your story it really got me hooked it made me feel like I wanted to read more.
how did you think of the title?
next time you could of made it more eye catching 🙂
Oki ill try guys.
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In the beginning, I was so hooked to read your story, and it was really good
at the beginning it hooked me so I wanted to read it
this story was mind blowing i wonder if you should be an author
Patrick i like the falling bit:)
it was amazing
wow good work pat
Nice story Patrick!
Where did you get the inspiration from?
Even better if you used more adverbs.
In your story it really got me hooked it made me feel like I wanted to read more.
how did you think of the title?
next time you could of made it more eye catching 🙂
Oki ill try guys.