I like the story but you need to improve your capital letters and your spelling.
Your description was really good, but even better if you can double check your work, like punctuation
I like your story need to improve spelling .
Nice adjectives. Even better if you put more punctuation.
Kornelia
that was really good Erica try and use conjunctions
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I like the story but you need to improve your capital letters and your spelling.
Your description was really good, but even better if you can double check your work, like punctuation
I like your story need to improve spelling .
Nice adjectives.
Even better if you put more punctuation.
Kornelia
that was really good Erica try and use conjunctions