Josh story.

Posted on March 24, 2015 by Deleted User
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11 Responses to Josh story.

  1. Javena says:
    March 24, 2015 at 9:48 am

    I liked the story I also imagined it in my head. My favourite part was when Josh scurried to catch the magical pig.

  2. kouam says:
    March 24, 2015 at 9:51 am

    Josh! that was an amazing story.

  3. kouam says:
    March 24, 2015 at 9:52 am

    Josh it was an amazing story.

    by mark

  4. johnc says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:07 am

    I really like your story Josh u used adjectives, verbs and adverbs it was AMAZING!

  5. ziemp says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:15 am

    I like how it said nothing has happened yet…
    And very interesting I want to read more.

  6. Erica says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:15 am

    I like your punctuation it was also amazing

  7. Erica says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:16 am

    I like your punctuation it is also amazing

  8. mikok says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:23 am

    VERY NICE ADVERBS!!!!!!!!!!

    Kornelia

  9. mcdem says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:25 am

    i need to look in the thesourus for those adjectives.

  10. Anonymous says:
    March 24, 2015 at 5:31 pm

    lovely story bosh why was it a magical pig dose it have wings

  11. diazs says:
    March 26, 2015 at 12:06 pm

    this story is FANTASTIC.
    where did you get inspiration from the magical pig?
    better if you write a bit more of fronted adverbials.

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