Javenas Story

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6 Responses to Javenas Story

  1. mikok says:

    Your story is energetic and I can’t wait to find out the rest.
    Next time try to do less repetition.

    Kornelia

  2. caruk says:

    I like like it!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. mikok says:

    I can’t wait to find out the rest.
    Next time try to do less repetition.

    Kornelia

  4. Josh says:

    This description was really good, with really good adjectives.

  5. mcdem says:

    “OMG” your story so mind blowing and energetic.

  6. hindt says:

    coooooool

    Thomas

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