sebastian story

Posted on March 24, 2015 by Deleted User
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11 Responses to sebastian story

  1. sungj says:
    March 24, 2015 at 9:36 am

    I like the name Steve because is my teddy you can have more punctuation

  2. mikok says:
    March 24, 2015 at 9:42 am

    Your story is very adventures .

  3. Josh says:
    March 24, 2015 at 9:44 am

    I liked the name Steve as it reminds me of Minecraft. What would be even better if you can double check your work

  4. kouam says:
    March 24, 2015 at 9:55 am

    I agree with Josh… it does remined me of mine craft.

    by mark

  5. caruk says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:00 am

    Sebastian I like the name Steve because it reminds me of Minecraft but check your work 🙂

  6. mcdem says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:13 am

    your story was funny i could not stop laughing

  7. mcdem says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:17 am

    this story was so funny i could not stop laughing

  8. Javena says:
    March 24, 2015 at 10:17 am

    I liked the story but you need to check your spellings. Also you need to make it more eye-catching.

  9. diazs says:
    March 26, 2015 at 11:56 am

    next time i will

  10. Josh says:
    March 26, 2015 at 12:08 pm

    I love your opening sentence as it had three adjectives.

    Where did you get your inspiration from?

    I would suggest to check your work, as you need capital letters.

    Apart from that.. WELL DONE!

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