100wc Tim and charles 03.07.14

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  1. mbaker38.207 says:

    Hi Timothee and Charles,

    You have left us in suspense boys! I like the way you have used ideas from Goldilocks and the Three Bears.

    Next steps-> Make sure that you mark the end of every sentence with a full stop. This will make your writing easier to understand for your reader.

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