D’Richy Ava 100wc 03.07.14

Posted on July 3, 2014 by Deleted User
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1 Response to D’Richy Ava 100wc 03.07.14

  1. mbaker38.207 says:
    July 6, 2014 at 10:06 pm

    Hi D’Richy and Ava,

    You have made me feel hungry. Cohiro and her family were lucky to find such a feast. You used commas well to separate the items in your list.

    Next Steps-> Be careful not to use a comma when actually a full stop would be better.

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