You have used lots of interesting ideas in your writing. It is unusual. I like the way you managed to tell a whole story in just 100 words. You even finished it off nicely!
To make your writing even better, you could make sure that you begin EVERY sentence with a capital letter. Also, do you know how to use the spell checker in j2e?
Hi Aaron,
You have used lots of interesting ideas in your writing. It is unusual. I like the way you managed to tell a whole story in just 100 words. You even finished it off nicely!
To make your writing even better, you could make sure that you begin EVERY sentence with a capital letter. Also, do you know how to use the spell checker in j2e?
Mrs Hames.
It’s amazing for a child that age and is alone