100wc Karolina 03.07.14

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  1. mbaker38.207 says:

    Hi Karolina,

    I can see that you have used ideas from Cinderella and from the Spiderella play that our American visitors shared with us, in your writing. Well done!

    To make your writing even better next time, read over it before you blog it. Check that you haven’t missed out or repeated any words and that each sentence makes sense.

    Mrs Hames.

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