I love that you included an image with your response; and you chose an interesting colour and font . It sounds like you may have had the experience of watching the northern light with friends or family. You made some good descriptive word choices and punctuated well. I enjoyed reading your 100WC. Thank you.
Lucky you! Your description of the Northern Lights is so good that I’m sure you’ve seen it. You might check next time that you have a space AFTER a full-stop, rather than before. I enjoyed reading you 100WC.
Ms Christie
Australia
Lucille,
You really capture the excitement and experience the friends have of seeing the northern lights – and a great picture chosen to accompany the story! I love the adjective ‘marvellous’ that you use. Well done!
Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg
I love that you included an image with your response; and you chose an interesting colour and font . It sounds like you may have had the experience of watching the northern light with friends or family. You made some good descriptive word choices and punctuated well. I enjoyed reading your 100WC. Thank you.
Lucky you! Your description of the Northern Lights is so good that I’m sure you’ve seen it. You might check next time that you have a space AFTER a full-stop, rather than before. I enjoyed reading you 100WC.
Ms Christie
Australia
Lucille,
You really capture the excitement and experience the friends have of seeing the northern lights – and a great picture chosen to accompany the story! I love the adjective ‘marvellous’ that you use. Well done!
Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg
Thank everybody for reading my story and thank you for the wonderful feedback
Lucille
That’s epic 🙂