A nice heartwarming story about working together and being hospitable. Well done! The pigs are angelic alright for inviting the wolf in for soup. You have good wow words like scrumptious and resources. A well written piece that reads well. Good job!
I really love the twist at the end of you 100 word challenge, Andro! I think it’s especially great that the pigs and wolf could get along. It was very creative to have them live in the same house and use the different building materials to make one house together. Just don’t forget to check the difference between “to” and “too” in your second sentence. Keep up the excellent writing!
Well done Andro, your modern twist on a traditional tale made my class laugh out loud! Keep up the good work.
A nice heartwarming story about working together and being hospitable. Well done! The pigs are angelic alright for inviting the wolf in for soup. You have good wow words like scrumptious and resources. A well written piece that reads well. Good job!
I really love the twist at the end of you 100 word challenge, Andro! I think it’s especially great that the pigs and wolf could get along. It was very creative to have them live in the same house and use the different building materials to make one house together. Just don’t forget to check the difference between “to” and “too” in your second sentence. Keep up the excellent writing!
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Andro,I like the fact that you magpies a little bit of the three little pigs story and then gave it a little twist in the end!