Georgias story

9 Responses to Georgias story

1. caruk says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:04 am

   I like your descriptive language 🙂
2. Josh says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:07 am

   Your story had very good fronted adverbials, and the mc donalds burger you described put a picture in my head that i am eating one!
3. Erica says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:11 am

   I like the mysterious tunnel and the mc donald hamburger with fanta
4. Javena says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:22 am

   I loved the story a lot I liked the bit when you said horrible frozen monster.
5. ziemp says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:24 am

   I like how you did down down down instead of down he went.
6. mikok says:

   March 24, 2015 at 10:28 am

   I like the names Jason and Cherry.

   Kornelia
7. jazmine says:

   March 24, 2015 at 5:29 pm

   i love you dog in store hahahah
8. hindt says:

   March 25, 2015 at 10:08 am

   I like the way it is set out
9. georgia says:

   March 26, 2015 at 12:02 pm

   thanks

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