The writing that made me laugh was, one million smelt like poo.
I like the part when Rhys was searching his hard maths:)
I love your story but there were some mistake like look at the light blue bit it said [When He]
I like the way you wrote that story
next time you can make your letters larger
I love it when it says GIANT! it makes me feel excited
next time to make the story even better you can use less dialogue
How did u get all these smells and tastes?
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The writing that made me laugh was, one million smelt like poo.
I like the part when Rhys was searching his hard maths:)
I love your story but
there were some mistake like look at the light blue bit it said [When He]
I like the way you wrote that story
next time you can make your letters larger
I love it when it says GIANT! it makes me feel excited
next time to make the story even better you can use less dialogue
How did u get all these smells and tastes?