The Big Fat Pig sounds like such a villain! I love the way you used the word ‘captured’, well done.
Next steps-> Make sure that you use capital letters and full stops to show where every sentence ends and the next one begins. This will make it much easier for your readers to read and understand your writing.
Dear Beau & Oscar,
The Big Fat Pig sounds like such a villain! I love the way you used the word ‘captured’, well done.
Next steps-> Make sure that you use capital letters and full stops to show where every sentence ends and the next one begins. This will make it much easier for your readers to read and understand your writing.
Mrs Hames.