Keira I like the questioning tone of your story, inviting the reader to wonder what the picture is all about. Just keep an eye on your spelling, and then your story will be even more fun to read! Nice job writing on the 100WC, keep up the good work.
Dear Keira,
I really liked the concept of your story.
It is very imaginative and descriptive.
Although, just keep an eye out on your grammar and punctuation.
A part from that, a well thought out story.
Yours sincerely,
Afrah:D
Keira I like the questioning tone of your story, inviting the reader to wonder what the picture is all about. Just keep an eye on your spelling, and then your story will be even more fun to read! Nice job writing on the 100WC, keep up the good work.
Great job Keira! Make sure to watch your spelling and punctuation and you’ll be a great story writer.
Dear Keira,
I really liked the concept of your story.
It is very imaginative and descriptive.
Although, just keep an eye out on your grammar and punctuation.
A part from that, a well thought out story.
Yours sincerely,
Afrah:D
keira that is such a good story well done !!!!