Well done Lucille, you came up with an imaginative idea for this week’s prompt! I like the opening sentence where you set the scene very well for your reader. I also liked that it could have happened anywhere not just in a stables.
You left me wondering what the treasure might be!
Keep up the good writing,
Nicola Richardson, 100 wc team, Tyne and Wear, UK
Well done!
I really like the effect of your short sharp sentence: ‘The day came.’
Perhaps in your next story you could end with an unexpected twist to surprise your readers.
Great writing- keep it up!!
Well done Lucille, you came up with an imaginative idea for this week’s prompt! I like the opening sentence where you set the scene very well for your reader. I also liked that it could have happened anywhere not just in a stables.
You left me wondering what the treasure might be!
Keep up the good writing,
Nicola Richardson, 100 wc team, Tyne and Wear, UK