What a mysterious piece of writing! I wonder what the music was?
Next steps -> Try to focus on telling just one part of a story in more detail with your 100 words. Then, your reader will be able to understand what is happening more easily and you can use lots of description to help them make a picture in their mind.
Hi Shannon & Jayden,
What a mysterious piece of writing! I wonder what the music was?
Next steps -> Try to focus on telling just one part of a story in more detail with your 100 words. Then, your reader will be able to understand what is happening more easily and you can use lots of description to help them make a picture in their mind.