Hello Maya and Donino,
I like how you have used a traditional tale and made it your own by changing things.
To make your writing even better, try thinking about some interesting ways to start your sentences.
Keep writing.
Ms R. Orr Head Teacher Team100
Hi Maya (Star of the Week!!) and Donino,
Your writing is very funny. I can tell that you must be interested in the World Cup at the moment and decided to set your story in Brazil!
Next steps-> When we are typing, we must always put a space after a full stop. This spreads out our writing and makes it easier to read.
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Hello Maya and Donino,
I like how you have used a traditional tale and made it your own by changing things.
To make your writing even better, try thinking about some interesting ways to start your sentences.
Keep writing.
Ms R. Orr
Head Teacher
Team100
Hi Maya (Star of the Week!!) and Donino,
Your writing is very funny. I can tell that you must be interested in the World Cup at the moment and decided to set your story in Brazil!
Next steps-> When we are typing, we must always put a space after a full stop. This spreads out our writing and makes it easier to read.