charmagne story

2 Responses to charmagne story

1. Year 4 says:

   March 26, 2015 at 11:33 am

   I liked how you explained that the tree was a portal in disguise, not simply a portal.
   What is a pixie? Maybe you could use some more adjectives to help me picture the story better in my mind.

   Well done!
   • deguc says:

     March 27, 2015 at 6:27 pm

     thanks for the advice

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