Ella in crazy world

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6 Responses to Ella in crazy world

  1. store says:

    well done very creative your the best I’m inspired by you

  2. Josh says:

    I really love your verbs, adverbs and adjectives.

    Where did you get the name Pegasus from?

    I suggest that you could have explained more between the first paragraph and second.

    Apart from that, WELL DONE!

  3. mikok says:

    Ella your story is very adventures!
    Where did you get the idea?
    It would be even better if you used more adverbs.

    but a very WELL DONE!


  4. hindt says:

    make it more eye catching

  5. byerj says:

    whot a magicol store ella

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