well done very creative your the best I’m inspired by you
please try not to use yellow
I really love your verbs, adverbs and adjectives.
Where did you get the name Pegasus from?
I suggest that you could have explained more between the first paragraph and second.
Apart from that, WELL DONE!
Ella your story is very adventures!
Where did you get the idea?
It would be even better if you used more adverbs.
but a very WELL DONE!
make it more eye catching
whot a magicol store ella
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